Good morning, thank you for your application! It is currently under review and we will return to you shortly, thank you for your patience. I have taken the liberty of correcting your thread title (typical title format can be found here). Feel free to make any edits you like whilst we review this application.

@kijin Thanks, I’m trying to get a pc. So all my post are from my phone.  

Yeah I get it, it can be difficult writing on a mobile device - you must have a lot of patience!

This application is fine for the most part - there are some areas that need a little work for example where capitalisation hasn't been used but this isn't a writing contest and I know for a fact English isn't everyone's first language so I'm happy for these issues to be corrected after approval. 

I would see if you could flesh out his appearance a little more as it's the shortest section of your application (does he have short hair, for example, or long?), but the other areas seem fine. Give it another once over then @ me and I'll come take a look?

@kijin I’ll work on the details for his appearance.  Thanks for the tips, really appreciate that. Writing hasn’t ever been my strong point. But I do enjoy RP, so hopefully I can jump back into it and improve my skills. I’ll post an updated version later. 

@kijin Here’s an updated one, hopefully this is ok. I have a few ideas for shikai, and bankai to throw around. Generally I’ve always been the type to do fire based. But with Haruki being a doctor, if figured I could somehow mixed a lighting/electric theme into this new character..

Name: Haruki Akiyama

Race: Shinigami

Affiliation: 4th division

Name: Haruki Akiyama

Age: 300 

Birthday: 18th of February 

Appearance: 

Haruki keeps a youthful look, almost appearing to be around 20 years old. He has bright pink eyes, and longish pink hair.  Haruki wears sleeveless shinigami outfit, and straw Sandals.  His zanpakuto is strapped to his back. Haruki’s height is 5”4, and weighs 100 pounds.  Haruki is consider small, and uses this to his advantage while fighting. Haruki has his division number tattooed on his right shoulder, the center of his abdomen has a scar inflicted on him from his sensei during a training session.  While preforming his duties in the infirmary, Haruki wears a lab coat with zigzag stitches sewn into it. 

Personality:

most of the time he is cheeful and calm. 

For all his strength, one wouldn't know the extent of it at the first glance. he has taken a laid-back and non-adversarial approach when dealing with matters concerning his duties as a member of the gotei and is very much personable. he would prefer to, and is often able to, use voice of reason to resolve problems to the point of appearing goofy and cowardly.

Though extremely rare, Haurki can also be sadistic and cold-hearted when his tolerance reaches its limit or his anger is at an apex. 

Biography: 

Human life: During his time as a human, Haruki had always liked working with computers and working with his hand to hand combat training. From time to time he would also teach his friends and family things he was able to learn during his training. While he was not working or training, Haruki would often walk the lake near his house and swim to a small island sitting in the middle of it. And sit there for hours doing nothing but watching the lake. Only doing this so he would be able to keep those close to him safe. Since he worked on computers, he stayed in work late one night. While latter walking home he was attacked by three men. Knowing hand to hand combat he was able to fight them off before one of them pulled a gun out and shout him in the chest leaving him there to die. It did not take him long after being shot in the chest to die from the wounds.

Rukongai life: During his life in the 3rd District of the West Rukongai. Having nothing else to do with his life. Haruki spent most of the day trying to become better with hand to hand combat. When he was not doing this, he was able around never living in once place for to long. After speeding three years working on this during this time he was able to teach others he knew how to use this in case they ever needed to.. He entered the Academy.

Academy life: During his time in the Academy he proved to be great with using hakuda and kidou. Using hakuda proved to be one of his best skills he was able to use he was top in his class with using hakuda. Since he was good with kidou he began to work on his kaido. Which he was decent with using, after three years in the Academy he was able to join one of the 13 divisions.

@kaienshiba Character Application Approved for Yonbantai. You are promoted to Yonbantai Taichou. The 4th Division will need setting up, which will happen a little later today, let me know if you have any queries. 

Good Afternoon @kaienshiba. The 3rd and 4th Divisions have since closed, in exchange for the 1st Division opening up. We felt it was best to focus our efforts on just one Division at a time. If you're still interested in joining the RP as a Shinigami, please let me know and I'll include you within our 1st Rankings.